To cope with the existential dread of living in the twenty-first century, try reading some of the funny comments my editor has made on my manuscript! I'll be adding to these weekly as she says more funny things.
*arrow points to the phrase, "bent over"* okay cheeked up
?? there are five of them, not six
lame adjectives. spice it up.
too many people are getting killed the same way.
is he [Devereaux] even supposed to know that?
*points out a sentence I forgot to finish* gotta pay for the special edition to get the full sentence!